The New York
Times article, "Since They Lost Sammy," by N.R Kleinfield is mainly
about what Amy
Cohen and Gary
Eckstein have been doing to improve traffic safety in New York City. This
article is roughly organized into four sections.
First, Kleinfield
begins the article with a description of Amy Cohen recording car speeds and
other statistics, and how she and Gary Eckstein are doing as much as they
possibly can in order to dissolve traffic casualties. In the first section, the
author also gives a brief background on how Sammy's family is doing.
In
the second section, Kleinfield develops on how Sammy's death has made an impact
on so many people. Kleinfield writes, "Mourners wondered what they could
do. Sammy’s parents told them to write their
representatives and urge traffic-safety measures." This relates back
to Kleinfield’s main point of Sammy’s parents trying to make a difference in
traffic conditions.
In the next section, Kleinfield focuses on Sammy’s death and
how, on a personal level, it effected Amy and Gary’s campaign. “The ritual gave
Ms. Cohen the idea to print a compact booklet of pictures depicting Sammy’s
short life — on a swing, swimming, picking pumpkins — with an inscription
exhorting action to make streets safer. This became their calling card.” This
also relates back to Kleinfield’s main idea.
The final section is solely about Amy Cohen and Gary Eckstein
trying to improve traffic conditions so that no one else gets hurt.
Although Kleinfield
is seemingly non-opinionated throughout the article, his use of examples and
word choice, as well as his perspective on Sammy’s death turn the article into
something like a red flag, saying that something has to be done about the
traffic conditions in New York. The author also often pulls away from his main
idea in order to write a brief anecdote about Sammy’s family and how they are
dealing with their loss. This adds a personal feel to the story for the reader.
The structure in this article of the four sections helps
organize the reader and helps keep the author’s main idea relevant. As
Kleinfield progresses in his article, he also becomes more and more specific to
his main idea.
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